Reverse me

by ah satan 666   Nov 19, 2012


I see a small light,
at the end of my dark day.

Forgive me,
for I am mistaken...

Its just a full moon,
in a pitch black star less sky.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Ohh i love this one, I adore poems about the sky and stars and moon, this is very well penned.

    It is both hopeful and then dark and sad rolled into one, But I did read this backwards and it creates the opposite meaning of reading it normal.

    <3 this !

    • 11 years ago

      by ah satan 666

      You got it saffie <3

      Thank you guys :)

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    This maybe short but I loved it
    A really unique piece

    Well written indeed

  • 12 years ago

    by Wild flower

    I agree with Tara, this short piece is soo deep, and the more I think whats behind it, the sader it becomes..

    Having the light of the moon, is better than nothing, if there's light just hold on to it, it may shine brighter^__^

    Great job:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Natasha, even in the shortness of this piece I can feel a deep sadness that brings tears to my eyes, to say that you see light but that light is just the moon, its like you are saying that it means nothing, which just breaks my heart.

    Lovely piece, really sad but written perfectly, and simply

    x

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