Web of Greed (Eintou)

Meena has intoxicated me with this breathtaking formed poem! I'm Drunk!!

The title made me have a visionary display of a greedy man wrapped in a spiders web, with money stuck in his jaws and that was just with the title alone!

I truly admire formed poems that (a) highlight the form with spot on syllable count and (b) leave me speechless with the flow and rhythm of the formed piece as well..

The message took me in several angles: Greedy businessmen feeding on today's youth just to make a dollar and where nothing is sage when greed and shame is luring the innocent... This piece was sad, and honest, mixed with class... Brilliant piece in my eyes!! Well Done

Superbly Done Meena.

Strikingly beautiful and great style! Congats Meena!

Congrats on the win sweetie. Such a strong and beautiful piece. I've missed your work dearly. *hugs* -Nik

I always love when I stumble about a form of poetry that I haven't come across before....never heard of this style before but...I loved it. You've done a wonderful job getting such a powerful message across in such a restricted form.....very well done! Thing this must have won while I was gone and I missed it when it was on the front page. ...glad I found it today!