Comments : Happy Birthday (acrostic)

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    Such a fab piece and the attempt of an acrostic suits the tone of your poem.. spot on!:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Awww Sonia you did excellent with this acrostic! Better than I imagined..when I wrote my Happy Birthday acrostic I had each letter as a sentence so this was sooo much better the way you worded it lol

    Lovely dedication to a special person Im sure :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I enjoy reading acrostics and I also love friendship poems... they make me smile and feel good... Beautiful dedication to your friend!

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This was a really thoughtful poem, good work on the form, you pulled it off well.