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by Hannah Nov 19, 2012 category : Life, society / faith, religion
The clock strikes twelve and the lightning strikes The people run in frenzy Fearing the end of their lives The storms swarm humanity Soulless Not intact This mass hysteria Is a mess Of malcontent The furies ravage the souls of the worthy Takes away their spears and hopes The dreams are cut by sharpened silver And they fall Down, down, down And you think for sure The heroes survive And you think they'll come back alive Even as they're speared on a knife Reality isn't that fair Even myths know it's true The world can turn blank white and black Or even royal blue The Hugh isn't the error The problem lies inside The falsities belie the everyday faces They lay in everyone And even in you I know There are traces You can't escape the trap It has shut "Snap!" On us all And one day I hope You'll see the shapes Not just lights of black, white Or maybe royal blue God bless the readers Hope and pray that The Lord may save you
by Amreen
Very nice.... I like the depth of this piece... You tried conveying a disaster and then spoke a message along and that is very mature.... Good piece girl:)
by Hannah
Aww thanx so much!! :-) I'm so glad you liked it
Glad you think so