Comments : Marlene

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Simply beautiful. X

  • 12 years ago

    by Angie

    Its such a sad disease... seeing those we love going through the stages... and this is a beautifully sad write...

  • 12 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    So sorrowful piece! Alzheimer?? Such a disease with stages so difficult to bear. Your penning made me freak on sadness. Loved it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    Strong and emotional... I could feel your emotions dripping to express your sorrow for your diseased friend... This is such a sweet dedication.... <3

    Keep writing :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    You are one amazing woman...such a kind nature.
    This was so sad yet so beautiful...a really amazing write that left me :O and :'(

    xx

  • 12 years ago

    by ah satan 666

    @.@

    You have such a sweet graceful tone,
    Sad but very Beautiful missy x

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    *sniff*

    I love the people you work with...I cant even comment on this because you send me videos of them so I felt so united with this poem as if I wrote it for them...

    ugh..I love your kind heart and your touching poetry.

  • 11 years ago

    by Wild flower

    This is really sad and touching. Alzheimer is a cruel disease I hate it:/

    You words said a lot, and they showed too how a nice person you are. Great job:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Beautiful Maple, your heart is so big and caring. x