Oh my.....i adore this form style, i have only ever written one but i think i have to revisit this...

As for the content....seriously you freakin wreck me, i ALWAYS LOVE your word choice and flow but the words like Whirlwind, Compass, Gravitate and Grasping gave so much emotioni and weight to what your trying to convey...and i have to say you did it masterfully.

i love this write and i love you x

Very Nicely Done!!!