Deliver (Lanturne)

by MyHalozChokinMe   Nov 20, 2012


Fear
subsides;
Tenderly,
love embraces
me.

~The Lanturne is a five-line verse shaped like a Japanese lantern with a syllabic pattern of one,
two, three, four, one.~

Authors Note: It looked like a lantern when I wrote it on paper. Just sayin!

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  • 11 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Splendid!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by MyHalozChokinMe

    <3

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Im lovin this form writing i have been seeing from you babe....seriously how many freakin emoitions can you get from five lines????..i love this type of form the word choice is so so important and yours, as usual was epic...you Rock my world \m/

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