Beautiful Devastation

by Hannah   Nov 20, 2012


Oblivion
Consumes my sight

Metal spears my corpse

A blink, a blink
Reads across my lap
"Beautiful baby, please be safe"
Flashes across the screen

Chaos rings
Through my ears
The sirens, the traffic, the panic
It's beautiful

I dip a finger
In a crimson pool

I inscribe on the window
My very last words
"I'll miss you Jamie"

It's my last creation
A work
Of beautiful devastation

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  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This imagery is so powewrful here. It tells a short little story of loss and pain and I think you described this very well. The image of the puddle of blood and then the writing with it. very unique. well done

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    An emotional write and you create brilliant imageries with your poem gal... This is raw and awesome:)

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