Night of Love

by Ali   Nov 20, 2012


As night fell upon us & we looked at each other,
I wanted you madly and looked no further,

I held you and started to kiss you passionately,
I wanted your love more and I got it ultimately,

You kissed me back and I just couldnt control,
The sight of your beauty I forever wanted to behold,

Our hearts pumping fast and our breaths went wild,
I put my hands on you and together we smiled,

With our love and emotions running at new highs,
Just me and you and our love shining in our eyes,

I went wild I went crazy I opened up my love for you,
Whatever happened it happened and I never had a clue,

Our love ruled that moment as we crossed every border,
It just kept on flowing and it was without any order,

I just couldnt resist and kissed your heart intensely,
Our bodies shivering our breaths missing so tensely,

The kisses were endless the emotions were limitless,
As again and again our lips came close and we caress,

The feel of your soft lips against mine is just amazing,
The kiss of love thats what it is with our hearts blazing,

The moment of this intense love never seem to end,
With true love, emotions and a honest intend,

You just melted in my arms and tears started flowing,
You hugged me tight with our love just growing & growing,

Your tears were just too much for me & I also cried,
You're my life you're my wife My Princess you're my bride,

This moment of extreme love ended with kisses all around,
I love you I told you in your love forever I have drowned.

**Dedicated to the Love of my life my Wife, I love you Princess you're my life**

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  • 11 years ago

    by NobodyKnowsItButMe

    Really long but I was left wanting to read more...!
    Loaded with emotions and filled with passions!
    I really really loved reading your poem!
    Wonderful piece of poetry!
    Keep writing!!!
    100/100

    • 11 years ago

      by Ali

      Thanks alot :-)

  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Ali, its a long poem bt ur rhyming and choice of words make it easy for d reader to read it..
    I loved dis poem.

    • 11 years ago

      by Ali

      Thanks alot for reading and commenting! Really appreciated!!!!!!!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Ali

    Thanks alot for your sweet and considerate comment & thanks for the correction as well.

    So true love is bold and yea she is my lovely wife and yes its a new bond very recent! and even she loved the poem which was my main objective.

    Thanks again for this lovely comment I will surely go through your poems and comment on them as well.

    Thanks :-)

  • 12 years ago

    by Kate

    "You just melted in my arms and tears started flowing,
    You hugged me tight with our love just growing & growing"

    ^^^ In this last line, you only need one "growing". It still fits the flow amazingly.

    Well... you know... this is so sweet, even I almost cried. Let me start by wishing you and [from the way it sounds] beautiful wife a fantastic life together :)

    I liked the rhyme you put in the poem. A bold move with some but love is bold so yeah. :)

    "This moment of extreme love ended with kisses all around,
    I love you I told you in your love forever I have drowned."

    ^^^ this one is definitely my favorite part of the poem, no doubt. Now, if you dont mind me asking, how long have you two been married? By this poem, it seems recent or maybe you're just an expert at making old flames reappear.

    This poem captures the heart of the reader and it makes you feel the love. It's a beautiful piece. :)

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