This is wonderful dear... the description,in a simple manner,it includes all that is to be conveyed...i loved it all!
5/5
^_^

Brilliant! I loved it and the passion that you convayed. The reader would instantly believe that you could succede in your desires and dreams through the sheer will and intesity that you fight with for what you want. I loved it!(Wait did I say that already? lol) 10/5 if it were posible, so I have to settle for just the 5/5 that is allowed. ;-)

To all you I say
Let your heart and soul
Lead the way
I'll be a musician
Bass guitarist
A novelist
A poetess

^ Loved the ambitions, the desire to be "someone"....so many of us lack this. I hope you find the support you need. Wonderful to be a teen with goals....makes getting there a lot easier. Loved your thoughts and wish you success in your pursuits.

The poem centres around the theme "I know what's good for me and what's not". Confidence!!!
The opening stanza itself throws enough light on the theme of the poem.
I really loved the way u wrote it...like it.
Esp. the way u summarized it.
5/5

I like how your showing that you can't let people tell you how to live your life and what goals you should have. this poem shows how people can be so judgmental and controlling . it shows how you have to be strong enough and tell those people that you are you and you're not going to change for anyone.

Really i love your style!

Loveable style. I enjoyed the read.

Great choice of words. Beautiful piece!

Wonderful Spill, Excellent!!!

Wonderful Spill, Excellent!!!

Magnifique! You're very talented. 5/5

Love the overall concept of this poem and the way it was written. I know enough people who listened to other people... An unemployed biologist working at walmart just wishing they had listened to themselves over others and followed their passions, like art history. This put a smile on my face.

I'm speechless.....Beautiful, just beautiful.

This is what I should tell my mom and dad, worst case scenario to following my dreams: I'm not rich when I never wanted to be but I'm happy doing what I want, If I listened to them it would be living life for money and making nothing of my talents and interests.