Disintegrate

Awesome imagery here , I think
You have excelled your self here
I love it :)

Ooooo0o0 Look at my girl go :) I totally loved the layout of this shaped like a blade, and you want to know something?? I sent Jenni a stanza for a poem called "disintegrate" and she never sent one back for a collab! I hope you read this Jen and realize our idea is now crumbled because Saffie killed it!! LOL

anywho, I just found that ironic....The layout was sort of in a disintegrating manner and that was a nice touch to this piece. The words fall down like the blood your describing..interesting.

Well done hun!

Wow this is a really sad piece, but you nailed it, you wrote a perfect poem, I love your choice of words:)
Great job..

Hats off to you, for setting a scene missy...
Your wording makes it very easy to paint a picture,

"Snap.
My heart
has just shattered
into a thousand pieces"

^^ I like the way you project, how brittle and fragile a person heart can be.

Very sad piece,
Xx

Edit: also your layout looks like a shard of glass.

Nice

clever imagery throughout and I love how the line

'Like the sharpest dagger piercing through my chest'

is the one that makes the tip of the blade in this piece, very clever.

only nit, line 4 pieces looks a bit crazy ; )