Comments : Prince Charming (Lost his way)

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I actually don't believe in prince charming, though, I do believe in love. It's one of those things that are a mystery and well, it saddens me when relationships that I thought were "meant to be" end all of the sudden.

    I also think love shouldn't be a competition but it actually is. We end up competing and someone hS to win. But I dislike so much, when someone comes all of the sudden in a relationship when they know the couple has a beautiful relationship and gets in between and even more sad is that the relationship falls.

    I enjoy your choice of words, and even more the perfect job with rhymes. They sound so smooth. Not force at all, and to accomplish that with a long piece is impressive.

    Sorry about prince charming.. I guess I prefer not a prince.. Because a price is usually idolize by many. :(

  • 11 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Nice work. Keep penning.