I was way off with what I thought this piece was trying
To say but thank you for clearing it up this is remarkable , I love your vision , the way you word your
Poems just so much power ,

You are such a talent :)

First of all,i love this form.
second of all, you never fail to make me speechless with your powerful words and meaning hidden behind your words.
i love every single line. <3
added to my favs, dear! :)

The most attractive thing, beside the nice form, is the simplicity of words chosen. Great attempt and marvelous write as always.

Good form... I love your attempt... You spoke volumes with this piece... Brilliant message..... Just speechless!!