This is soooo deep and pwoerful. I loved the opening it was so eye catching and drew me right in. It shows how beat up you feel and haunted by them, how much they try and constantly bring you down to a point where you struggle to face them.

During the poem I liked how you gradually gave up trying, then towards the end you just gave up because it was easier than fighting, You realized that they feed on your fear and weakness and for them to stop you feel like you would have to let them eat you up. If they feel they win then they will stop.

It described a very high emotion of a fragile state of mind, depressiona nd isolation. Well done

This is indeed a thoughtful and profound write. It showcases many thoughts, a spirit of winning despite the world is agaisnt you and then the losing.
Beautifully crafted!!