I've read this 4 times now Chels... you have a gift in the eye and you see beauty and scribe it with elegance... I new you had the nature bug in you... love this piece!

This is brilliant chels... you are among the best writers on PnQ... This is just awesome chels:)

Whenever you post a new poem this is how I feel

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Ahahahahahhaha!.....what are you saying?

Ughhh, I have just got home and read this and saw that picture and just thought, everything here looks dull and grey and there is no life...it is blowing huge gales here, its wet and it's cold...and this poem just sent me away to that scene and I felt warm while reading...

You have such a way with words Chels, this was amazeBALLS!!

:) MWAH

<3 this poem. It is nice to see a nature poem from you. And also, how can someone not like a poem with a rainbow in it !

Love it xx

Chelsey :)

I don't know why this is not nominated. It's magnificent. I love the title. I remember my dad teaching me about the rainbow, and I found it a very peculiar colour, name - I even wrote a poem with it then, lol.
The picture is wonderful and inspiring. It is usually hard to justify those kinds of views with poems. Nature is something so awe-inspiring and most often than not, I find nature poems one-dimensional because they only tell; they only describe the colours, the image. This, however, is dynamic. The metaphors, word choice, and as it progressed, I could clearly see what you were writing about without having to see the picture.

"If only I could pick the petals of her mauve
and violet
skyline and put them in a vase on my
kitchen table
to make my home as exquisite as her site."

Exquisite, Chelsey. Beautiful metaphors, as always. Loved the 'v' sounds here. The sentence seemed awkward, though. Maybe it's just me. I would probably change 'to' to: I'd. Just a thought.
And site - sight? Not sure.

"She is her own rainbow with anonymous
colors
and lovers fall prey to her romantic
behavior."

So melodic. I absolutely adore this. The interchanging long/short 'o' sounds are lovely.

Loved how you controlled the scene too with "Georgia, at sunset/Georgia, at dusk" It's so peaceful.
Thank you for writing and sharing this. It brings good memories.

That was a perfect write, Chelsey.
*Sigh*
So amazing, especially the beginning.
I think I heard of Georgia in a song I cannot remember what's it called.... !! (Y)

^ Yes that's the one! Thank you:D