Blown away...(String Reverse Haynaku)

by ah satan 666   Nov 21, 2012


You effortlessly, blew
me away
once...

Effort's now subjected,
within your
presence...

Deceitful lies, charmed
a serpents
tongue...

Shattering my heart,
particles flew
twinkling...

Shimmering dust, rests
between my
ribs...

Now blown away,
by deaths
kiss.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Such a sad poem but done in a very creative way again. well done

    • 12 years ago

      by ah satan 666

      Thank you missy :)

      I have a few vents left in me,
      I need to get out xx

  • 12 years ago

    by Wild flower

    Wooow I love your formed poetry, just great^_^
    Well done:)

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