Comments : Things I do hate

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Mercy Khalid this poem is a form of stripping away at the layers of your soul type of piece... its a confessional of sorts... I admire you to release these feelings you have... in pieces such as this, I'm not going to break it down... speaks for itself... powerful piece... hugs you!

    on a technical note: I believe you meant "Injure" instead of injury?? It would read better if you placed injure...

  • 12 years ago

    by Mohan

    Nice written

  • 12 years ago

    by Mohan

    Nice written