Naked Bud (Eintou)

by Maple Tree   Nov 21, 2012


Petals
adorn the path
that leads me to your door,
knocking three times softly, I hear
you say "Hello my Rose",
I'm the flower;
you plucked.

Eintou:

African American style poetry form.
Line 1 - 2 syllables
Line 2 - 4 syllables
Line 3 - 6 syllables
Line 4 - 8 syllables
Line 5 - 6 syllables
Line 6 - 4 syllables
Line 7 - 2 syllables

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  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is so sweet Maple, and every clever. Another form I have not been familir with and you make it look so easy. Well done

  • 11 years ago

    by ah satan 666

    I don't understand why its in Miscellaneous...
    You could give Ben a run for his money with this piece...

    Its so a loooove poem!

    An elegant beautiful
    One at that :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    How cute, and adorable and just made me smile :)
    Andrea, this was really good, I love how you always add some sort of nature aspect to a piece and that is unique to you, but this was beyond words,

    To get that love and emotion in here, with the nature and the maturity, WOW

    xxxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    Oh so blissful... a treat to read this piece... Mesmerizing:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    So simple! Most adorable! The very simple beginig for love. Loved it. Fits on using this form, you rocked it.

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