OMG, OMG, OMG!! How comes. You described such a thing that no body and nothing in the universe can live without. No body can imagine living without sun. You can write books referring to such grace and after all you feel that you want to write more. Thank you Andrea for sharing.

This is spectacular... I love the creativity and the elegance of this piece...
Excellent:)

Wow! I love this. Can I ask why the lines break the way they do? (Not a bad thing, I'm just trying to see if you know something I don't lol)

Oh I love this... your nature pieces just move me...

and did you mean speak or speck?

Yeah, I was a but unsure whether you meant Speak or whether it should be speck and was a typo...

But you are just AMAZING!!! Nothing else to say...just AMAZEBALLS and :O

xxx

Welll if its the sun, maybe she ment speak, when I thought of it, sun rays are like the language of the sun, it speaks with us by giving us warmth and life:)
Anyways either way its AMAZING and I love it, awesome poem..

She is my adventure....

that is so true, you are ours adventure in the magic world of poems, thanks once more for sharing a pearl from you string of pearls

Whooooot! thank you everyone! I meant "speck" giggles.... and Craig, I like to write in all differnent styles and formats, so the break in the lines is just something I like to do from time to time... :-)

This is beautiful maple, and I am glad I read it on this cold and dull day, it brightened it up, thank you.