God graces

I love this piece!!! I have a relationship with God that I work on strengthening every day and you touched on one of the most important aspects of that relationship. HE knows what I need best, obviously not me (or else I wouldn't have landed in so much trouble in the past!). His grace is amazing! Beautiful piece, thank you!

His ways are always the best!
Well, the theme of the poem is a very good one...
Our expectations may not be fulfilled but it doesn't mean that God does not see or hear what we want or ask for..."He would grant you

with something

more beautiful

than what you want!"

one thing I want to point out :"but God didn't allocated it for me" here, it should be "didn't allocate" not "allocated"!
Over all, well written!

I think,

I am not sure but I think it will sound better if you say

"If your hope has gotten destroyed"

And I'm wondering in this sentence...
"but God didn't allocated it for me"

--- What does the " it" represents?

Aside from that this is a great message, I agree completely. God loves us even if our hope fades away. God knows why things don't work out but He also tries his best to keep us protected, its not within his hands to solve our problems but it's up to us to help oneselves that god will gives us the strength to continue forward.

So true Sir... We always think that we should have been granted something much better but what God plans for us is the best.. And we realise this when we actually trust him..
Excellent:)