Avery effective ,emotional,and clear vision of your mood i really liked it

That was really tempting... Visual by all means. I like the addition of Che Guevara, it adds to all other typical things (ashes, cigarettes, dusty shelves, etc...), for it seems that this person has fought fiercely before... and maybe surrendered at the end?!

Interesting piece, I'm really surprised by the real feeling and scene that the words portrays.

Though, I'm trying to decipher from where is the point of view coming from.

after reading the quote, I thought that perhaps this someone didn't commit suicide but that was the whole point of scattering the poems, of leaving the cup of coffee to get cold, and the cigarrettess, the dusty shelves, to make people believe that it was a suicide...

I could be wrong though.

I thought this poem was very interesting indeed. I loved the list of things in it and how important they all seemed to be. I couldn't help but think if you made a list of these objects up and gave them to others, how mnay poems we could make from them!

It is like a box of prompts for writing, and perhaps some of which is already why we have been writing and what has inspired us so far.

great poem xx