Lovely words, i like it so much

Ugh.......this is one hell of a write....you got this one wrapped up!!!

Your choice of words and the flow of this piece, in my opinion, is flawless, i loved it all...but....

"The periodical flooding of my heart
yielding to the pain of knowledge without action
moments of sensless penned hopes
letters later shattered."

^^^^^^

@_@!!! These lines are cRaZy gOoD!!!!

Blown away, totally.

EDIT:. And btw...the title is freakin awesome too!