What a strong message my dear friend! You made my heart freak on excitement. A truly lovable etheree showing how strong should be the relationship between partners. Great attempt.

This is such a beautifully written love poem. It doesn't seem to be like a formed poem because it flowed flawlessly making it look not forced at all. Etherees have a distinctive staircase effect structure which is appealing. It turns a well crafted piece to perfection. You really did a job welldone!

Love is an inexplibable emotion that's overwelming to a degree upon the human senses. It can turn the unforgiven to be forgiven. The evil to a saint. It turns a lot of bad courses into good tidings.
Love is fun and beautiful if exprienced with that one fated person who'll treat you like you ought to be treated. Let's cherish moments shared with our loved ones as memories will always stay etched in our hearts..

Love to be loved in return.
A splendid write and read!

OMG I love this!! What a lovely etheree <3 it was such a joy to read this, and it was like a breath of fresh air.

This is such a beautiful form of poetry and what you've written is even more beautiful. I enjoyed it from start to finish!

I love that you included what inspired you to write this... and I remember this poem by Pablo Neruda (I love him!) <3 It was a nice touch, and made us understand the poem even more.

Love it! Great job <3

Aww, thank you! Glad you liked it. (:

This was seriously strong I love the word
Choice it pours emotion , flooding the heart

5/5 awesome piece :)

Love entwined! A love so rare to find but if one does find its Heaven on earth!
My favourite "That when I fall asleep
your eyes close."
Wow! Simply wow!
Like it!

Well done, Alisha dear:)

Strong words and strong message, well linked to the words that you used as an inspiration!

Hope all is well with you,

5/5 Ingrid

Thanks everyone! :)

Beautifully penned. I think Neruda is a great influence to all of us, a remarkable poetry form as well. Keep writing.

Beautifully penned. I think Neruda is a great influence to all of us, a remarkable poetry form as well. Keep writing.

Beautifully penned. I think Neruda is a great influence to all of us, a remarkable poetry form as well. Keep writing.