by mizzy dominguez Nov 22, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I want to forget |
by Maple Tree
Its truly heartbreaking when someone you give your heart to breaks it... You have expressed your feelings quite well within this piece.. your rhyme pattern flowed very nicely... I liked the word usage of "unreadable face"... its true.. sometimes you think you know a person and then you find out later they were very wrong for you... touching piece! |