Wunderfully penned; like art. Dark is definately the place for this work. Very nice piece.

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Hello...
This is one very deep dark piece.

I had the single hit of a triangle chime in my head...

As if it was the door bell, at my souls door!

Nice tone,
Well penned kiddo :)

Though this poem is dark over the long haul I really enjoyed reading it after all

It feeds mi soul, these words can't be explained but fill me up to an overdue overflow of words, amazing,

I like it, enjoyed reading it

I loved it. Short, and sweet, but holding so much emotion and pain. 5/5

Great piece! Well done..
will surely read more frm u!

I really enjoyed reading this poem!

Though this piece is short it's full of imagery, perfect rhyming and emotion. It's written beautifully too.

Em

Just lovely! So much imagery allowing some dreaming time-well done-

Nice imagery. Despite being an old write, it still holds up well.

Take care.