Reflective waterfall

Your imagery is amazing, very realistic but with an essence of fantasy. Great poem!

The first stanza is fantastic you set such a tranquil scene here,

So much imagery throughout, nice to see a nature poem as detailed as this.

another excellent write from you Tony.

You've painted a pretty picture with your words Tony... I can smell the freshly cut grass and feel that warm breeze on my skin, I see day leaving as night sets in, the waterfall looks so pretty with the moon above it, I can hear the water flowing... yet here in the end I feel sad because of the forgotten one... this is the way a poem should be, causing all these feelings (seeing it, feeling it, smelling it, hearing it) for the reader... I love it Tony... well done!!

Wow, what a beautiful poem! I was so mesmerized from start to finish. I really loved the imagery you created. It was so lovely.

I must say my favorite part was:

"The flowers gently kiss every colour of the rainbow goodbye,"

Beautiful poem!! Love it <3

Wow, this is amazing... ive grown really fond of nature pieces lately.
fantastic imagery and word usage! :)
love 'the sun crawls towards a welcoming moon' so beautiful