Comments : Summer and winter, the love story [Rengay - Collab with Darren]

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    This is AWESOME.....!!!! It looked like your brains worked like one... And the form us fantabulous.... I can see both the form-heroes of PnQ come together for a superb piece.... The thoughts of the piece is so fresh... Nominated!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Khalid and Darren!! This was beautiful..... I love the comparison of romance ..... The seasons came alive as lovers in a sense... You 2 lost me... in this formed beauty! Elegant piece!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Hot and cold weathers can't meet
    but each has its own lovers

    ^^^ My favorite part! each to their own.

  • 11 years ago

    by Silent Scribbler

    Interesting piece. I really liked the form. The discriptions put me right there in the changing of the seasons and how they intertwine. Lovely, beatiful, romantic.

  • 11 years ago

    by Adelle

    The depth of this poem is extraordinary, the two so intwined they can not be one with out the other. I love e human attributes you have given the seasons.

  • 11 years ago

    by Skyler

    A seamless collaboration. I will also be reading Darren's poetry now.