by Amreen
This is AWESOME.....!!!! It looked like your brains worked like one... And the form us fantabulous.... I can see both the form-heroes of PnQ come together for a superb piece.... The thoughts of the piece is so fresh... Nominated!!! |
by Maple Tree
Khalid and Darren!! This was beautiful..... I love the comparison of romance ..... The seasons came alive as lovers in a sense... You 2 lost me... in this formed beauty! Elegant piece!!! |
Thank you Andrea :) |
by L
Hot and cold weathers can't meet |
Interesting piece. I really liked the form. The discriptions put me right there in the changing of the seasons and how they intertwine. Lovely, beatiful, romantic. |
by Adelle
The depth of this poem is extraordinary, the two so intwined they can not be one with out the other. I love e human attributes you have given the seasons. |
by Skyler
A seamless collaboration. I will also be reading Darren's poetry now. |