Awww.. Toq!

This is beyond beautiful, it brought a crescentic smile to my lips.

That girl is lucky to have you as friend. The part about Pi, so simple lol

and Eisenstein hair. haha.

=b Thank you!!

I sense that she knows she is a very lucky friend and making her smile.

lol, yeah Eisensteins hair, it was the first joke I told her and she couldn't stop laughing so I thought it would be a memorable one she would remember =]

Wow! This is a uniquely crafted poem. Its written with a different type of creative touch which made it very distinctive. I love it from the beginning till the end. I was captivated all through i was reading it. A beautiful dedication to your friend. I'm sure she'll be very proud of you receiving this artistic creation from you. Very rare with a precise demeanour to it. You've clearly shown your journey with your friend. How much she means to you and its obvious you both have a history together.

It clearly emanates love, care, concern and adore for one another. You've highlighted how you'll be there for her in times of need. My heart really goes out to this piece, its simply penned with your unique creative stroke.
For a moment you got me lost with the Eienstien's theory and the math formula. How clever is that. Speaks volumes about your admiration for your friend.

An exemplary approach this poem is to all. I always prefer such unique poems as gifts because they're ones personal words and will remain cherished by anyone been addressed to.. I really loved this.
Its a different write and i enjoyed reading it.
Great work! Tres Bien!!

Thanks very much Yakori!!! :)

And Yes!! she was really really delighted with the poem and it made her day, so smiles all around.

Awww this is such a sweet and heartfelt poem! I really enjoyed it from start to finish. I like the referral to Einstein's E=mc squared and Pie... it made it seem as though love is as simple as calculating mathematics, and when you find the one you want that is the right solution.

I also liked the structure, and the parts where there were periods and then a sentence.. it gave the poem a nice touch. I also like to play around with such structures and punctuation at times.

The ending was rather surprising... Because from the entire poem it felt like this is a person you knew and saw often, but when we find out that you have yet to discover her voice, it appears to be about a girl you know online. I think this is such a sweet dedication, and whoever this poem is for, is lucky to have someone like you.

Beautiful poem! :)

Can I have a guess who she is?:P lol

Anyways thus was really different(in a good way)
I love how you wrote it, it flowed really well. Great job^_^

I really liked this, it was so different and original from alot of poems that I've seen on here in a very long time.

". . . . Fountain of flourishing BEAUTY,
when you slow dance pirouette"

^^This was so easily one of my favourite parts, the imagery you paint here allows me to create such stunning images in my mind and leaves me smiling.

I was thrown slightly as some parts had a rhyme scheme whereas others didn't, however that didn't make the poem any less enjoyable for me.

I interpretated this as a poem about an online friendship and it truly moved me, as I too have a friend in the states on another site that I talk to often and you capture how magical and amazing such friendships can be even if you never or rarely meet in person.

I enjoyed this very much.

"You and I
Simple as Pi, 3.1415
An uncut diamond in the sky"

I thought the first two lines were very cute and I LOVE that last line. You've really captured the essence of your heart in this poem and I think its so sweet and tender!