Hanakotoba (Haiku)

by MyHalozChokinMe   Nov 23, 2012


Stoic White Camellia
Devouring winters rainfall
Patiently waiting

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  • 12 years ago

    by Hellon

    I love love love your title but...I always thought it was one word not two?

    Anyway....this is quite stunning....very visual for such few words and your word choice is excellent here! Beautiful little haiku!

    • 12 years ago

      by MyHalozChokinMe

      You are absolutely correct, it is one word.
      I can't believe I made it two, and cannot believe it wasn't pointed out until now.

      =)

      Thank you, ammended, and I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.

  • 12 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    A Lovely Haiku!!!

    • 12 years ago

      by MyHalozChokinMe

      Thank you Robert, for all of the comments you left today...

      =)

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Love the word usage for this elegant haiku... you are creative with this haiku... it has a spirited feeling to it... lovely!!!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Ooo cara what a beautiful haiku

    Your talent is shown here :)

    • 12 years ago

      by MyHalozChokinMe

      Thank you Tony.

      Surprisingly, this short Haiku was more difficult for me to write than any other poem... =/

  • 12 years ago

    by ah satan 666

    @.@!!

    Oh I'm bowing down alright,
    You never cease to amaze me
    Cherry blossom ;)

    • 12 years ago

      by MyHalozChokinMe

      I know you edited this post, I recall seeing something about the language of flowers. <3

      Pleased that you know of Hana Kotoba!

      And, thank you...

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