Comments : Everything i cant say....

  • 12 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Hope you like it... love poems are not really my strong
    suite...:)

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Even when I throw fits...

    ^^ I think it should be fists... Instead of fits..

    I did like it. There is so much emotion in it. I also enjoyed the rhymes.

  • 12 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Simple words but they are full of meaning when it comes to love. I find this poem a pleasure to read because it totally relates to very special guy in my life but I don't trust that we'll last.

    Nice job.

  • 12 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Thanks guys...always enjoy your advice: )

  • 12 years ago

    by Marvellous

    A good friend, will always remain. What's meant to be, will take some time.