Comments : Our Maple Tree

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Be still my heart!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    awww you made me cry! What a precious write.. thank you Khalid :-)

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    Ohhoho... Sir, this is so amazing... Just everyone is writing for MT... I too want to...
    But this is amazing and she must have liked this....
    And Sir, I think this is your first rhyme poem, isnt it?
    Wonderful attempt.... Im proud to have an inspiration like you here....
    <3

    • 11 years ago

      by Khalid M Darwish

      Yes Amreen we all should be proud of Andrea. For me, she's one of the P&Q solid pillars which every poet may consult other than her sweetness and experience. She really deserve that.

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    Well done with the rhymes, and also this was a beautiful poem about maple tree.

    I like the part where it says that robin rest in the branches.

  • 11 years ago

    by Wild flower

    Awwww this is a really nice dedication, awesome poem^_^

  • 11 years ago

    by Formidable Muse

    Aww

    "My tree that bears all dens and nests,
    on branches speaking of happiness
    swaying with love where robin rests"

    ^I absolutely love this line! How it describes a tree yet describes Andrea, how warm and beautiful she is. I know when I first joined this site she made me feel at home.

    Khalid, this is a very lovely poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by Adelle

    Beautiful I don't want to just say that but I'm lost for words beyond that. It is pure beauty.

  • 11 years ago

    by Skyler

    This is the first rhyming poem I've seen of yours. A lovely dedication, executed very well.