The title reminded me of a poem I once wrote, but the poem itself is so far from that, this is much better, the idea, wording, and everything about it:)

GREAT JOB:)

Hello Saffie :-)

I've read this poem several times now and I get a visual a bit different from before... its like you and the monster and hiding and seeking... You took a cute title and gave it a dark side... and I admire that... In the depth of this piece you have the monster who haunts you daily and then the drowning of the sea (tears , sadness, depression) and so the ending ties up all the sides into one.. that is why I love this piece so much... as for the depth and dark side to this piece emotionally, I have always admired the fact of how you can express yourself and emotions with such ease in your writes... it amazes me.... HUGS YOU!

It is an intriguing piece. I love questions in poems. They are though-provoking. I suppose the monster is inside all of us and it depends on our hearts to run away from it.Brilliant piece.