The imagery here is perfect. I could actually imagine it all. your poems are great. keep it up. I love reading them. it sucks when things get worse and you feel like there is no way out and nothing you can do to fix it.

This poem is so deep and intense. I love it!

I love this poem as well. The rhyming was fantastic and the flow and imagery was great too. I can imagine the water as depression I dont know if uou meant it that way but depression is drowning and traps us with no where to go so I love the metaphor there. I love all your poems as they are relatable to me. 5