by CarnivorousCoffin Nov 24, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
The keys are broken |
by Xanthe
Great title; it drew me right in. I love how you chose to write with this point of view, takes the reader into the whole scene. And the way you cut the lines gave this a more poignant, impacting tone, as do the simple choice of words. |