This is a very well written short poem
I really liked it , the wordings was
Perfect , shows you really wanna be with
This person just need the glue to put u together

Love it :)

Hannah!!!! First of all the title: I love it... I enjoy titles that are blunt and make you think... in my opinion one word titles are excellent for small and powerful pieces such as this... "And" makes me think of an ending that stops abruptly.. like And... happily every after... or Me And You... and your waiting for the You to make up his mind perhaps?? I got all of this just from your title alone... I love that!

Onto the poem: What an excellent small piece this is...swirls and curves... LOVE those words used to describe you both.. that was creative and fun! and the hopes of forming you both as one forever, just takes my breath away... LOVE THIS!!!

Haha sorry, I tend to get amuse rather excited by pieces that are clever such as this one.

The conjuction that makes the two of you together is the "and" and it makes it a sweet and charming piece. Well done!

I adore your love poems <3

This is very short and creates a lovely warm feeling. One thing I took from this is the word choice of swirls and curves, I found this interesting because they are simlar but not the same and I wondered if this could be that although the 2 characters may have their differences you will find a way to make the pieces fit together anyway because your heart tells you that they belong together!

nice poem.

I rarely use this word, but: cute piece, Hannah. Not to mention, creative. This literally made me smile.

This is a very precious poem, I like the fact that you kept it short because I think that it would have just taken from the idea if it was to be longer. At first I thought that the title was rather unusual, I actually still do, but now I know why you picked it, which is a very beautiful thought.

It was interesting that you got to the point right away too, by addressing this immediately without hesitation and I think that your whole poem has a very melodic sound to it.
I really enjoyed this. :)

Hannah Hannah.. You're a true genius. I, too, smiled. And this, though very short, speaks volumes. Awesome!

Nicely Done!!!

I like this:)

This is so dang precious :)

I mean really, I melted within this very tiny stanza, which shows what kind of beauty and power this poem brings.

Lovely write Hannah!

Lovely work. Short and simple, yet meaningful.

The title was so cleverly chosen, I loved it!

Its short, clear and straight to the point. Sometimes short pieces like this one can say loads and loads of things in just few simple words.

Greatly penned :)

Superb..

Must say Hannah.. You are perfect here...!
The title, I agree with others made me think and created a want to know what follows the word... The adjectives used to describe you and your lover is creative and fancy... Though this piece is short, It is more to the point, crisp and apt. You didn't wander around and said it all precisely. In the end, the use of the word 'conjunction' is creative and unique to stand for 'mate' or 'love'.
And I think that word inspired you to name the title because at the end, I understood the gist of your title which I think is ANDing two lovers to one..
Brilliant with this piece.
You came up as an Excellent writer:)
Keep writing

Wow. This one is awesome, so short yet so powerful. Great, nuff said, just great.

Wonderfully, powerful piece.

I think the title is one of the most important parts of a poem, it's what draws the reader in. I have high respect for people that carefully choose their title and use something meaningful or descriptive. Your's is quite brilliant and the poem is as well.