Chiffon

The title is itself unique in meaning. The last for words made the excellent ending of the poem. Now, what is more attractive is those words you used in a multiple manner ending with 'ing, adding the most beautifultaste of the poem revealing how romantic you are when describing the utmost emotional behaviour of a beloved in his utmost ecstacy.
Overall, You are really superior!!!!!!

This is beautiful Maple. and I love the shape , it looks like a flower to me. x

My darling, The love you possess is absolutely adorable and you always pen it so beautifully.
Amazing, just amazing :)
x x x

I always wander how many nature and love poems you wrote, and everytime you write one its so different fromall the others. Thats really amazing:)
As usual great job^_^