Relevance

by Poet on the Piano   Nov 24, 2012


The shades of your eyes are
mountain ranges that apprehend
Alps, and everything north.

Mediterrean sea is aging into
the hopeful romantic in me
and my fingers dance with
their own breath-
fondling dark chocolate truffles,
fireside novels, and
silence that can be written
like the tides.

I bend forward from my seat,
taking each image from the
beginning winter outside,
and longing for the swift days

of your eyes,
when sunlight shifts, windows touch,
and sincerity speaks from the sea.

I am waiting for your inspiration
to be recognized in me;
it may not seem the exposition
of your eyes show any significance,
but they will. I know they are
a world unable to be betrayed
by time's terminology.

We will await one another at
the yarned branches of trees or
at the shoulders of mountain's side,
and your eyes will be wonders of the
world I can love eternally.

* written November 24, 2012 at 5:35 pm.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    GRACIOUS ALMIGHTY WHAT IS THIIISSSSS????

    i want to snuggle this poem against my chest and make it a sweet reality...this is so breathtakingly beautiful Maryanne, I find my thoughts so jumbled right now because I feel like I just go done watching an amazing chick flick!

    You are such a gem, I just love love love this. Adding to my faves!!!!

    Sorry I cant break this down but my comment would just look like this
    Stanza 1- amazing
    stanza 2- " "
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    etc....

    Epic. OMG...going to read again!

  • 12 years ago

    by Silent Scribbler

    I love how you tie nature in with love. Makes it that much more romantic. They way that you penned it gave me chills, and I had to read it three times, just because I liked it that much. Absolutely beautiful piece.

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    This brought back memories of when I wrote a poem about eyes and comparing them to the ocean and the earth, except that mine was abstract XD. However, this was so delicately written. I just love that so much.

    I like the in take of mountains and the alps, of use of winter and pretty much everything about this piece. I also liked that you mention "and everything north".. the eyes are cold perhaps as white snow.. the sight of it, I'm guessing. And white snow is often used to indicate purity. So The sight would be captivating.

  • 12 years ago

    by Wild flower

    Im not a big fan of love poetry, but I read it.
    I am glad that I read yours, holds a huge amount of emotions, this is perfect in my opinion.
    Great job:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Mercy! This was such a beautiful write ... as you know Im a huge fan of nature tones mixed in with love poetry.. so I was speechless... but then I adore eyes when used in a love poem.. because in the eyes, you can see the true feelings... the eyes say it all.... Beautiful!! just Beautiful!!

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