Paw Prints ( Tanka )

This is a great poem as it shows how much you truly loved an animal so the title is so pure . I think its an animal at least. If you love a pet it is a truly hard thing they lose them. I love the first line as it shows how much you love them. Their paw prints live on. Which means they made such an impact on your life they left prints on your heart. Like you said they will always be in your heart. I love the tattoo as it is perminant. That truly means they will be there forever.

You will always have the purest love you know because of the closeness you always felt. You bring to life such an amazing feel though. You talk about them so sweetly and lovingly. Which means they were the purest of pure and one of the most kind things or person in the world. You really did do a great job here though. The flow is so great here and even though sad you can feel so much here. 5/5

For your first attempt Saffie, you did beautiful!

The message was heart felt.. the love of an animal is unconditional.. this made me tear up...

on a technical point.. 2nd line: for ever= forever

Huggles!!! Love this piece and very proud of you!

MOOOOORE TANKA'S PLEASE!!!!

A sad write, but i have to say and AMAZING write too.

Freakin Awesome!