Trust ( double tanka )

This poem is very sweet and heartfelt. :). Its hard to trust when you have been hurt inside. I love the feeling you have for this person here as it shows your love for them. I love the teaching part. People can teach you how to trust again and this person did this. You let them into your guarded heart snd they became a part of it. It always takes time to let people in. You have to build up the trust and that is difficult in itself. You akways have to be yourself around people. You can't change for anyone and thats why people fall for others. They trust them enough to let them in. One person can heal you fully and this person has for you of course. Allit takes is that one special pperson. I can see a couple of things. Some thing should be something. Some time should be sometime. Otherwise this poem is truly loving and heartfelt. This person is truly lucky yo have you!! 5/5

This was a beautiful write Saff <3

Sweety genuinely i'm honoured :)

Thank you so much for this poems i'm sure i don't need to tell you its straight in to my favourites and i will read this often.....:)

And your right, they wont win because deep inside you have a strong heart Saffie and a wonderful soul.

You choked me up with this poem in the nicest of ways, always here when you need me to be ( and probably when you don't too :p )

Awesome xx