Comments : Top of yearning

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    This poem sings beauty... beyond what the lines truly speak of... very pretty piece Khalid :-)

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    So blisful and tender... Beautiful imagery created with this small piece...
    Excellent:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Thanks to both of you, the most encouraging!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Wild flower

    I really like your formed poetry.
    This piem is great, awesome job^_^