I realy like your word play good piece |
by Amreen
Wonderful emotions here... the imagery is saddening and the repetition of the line makes this much brilliant:) |
Nice thoughts of you. |
by ah satan 666
@.@!! |
Hey..hey..I liked this one, |
I have to admit, the title captured my attention. It was simple; I sometimes write about the reality of things, reality of certain situations and how it can be unsettling. How reality could possibly seem so unreal. It just really set the atmosphere for this piece about not just feeling a sort of confusion, but having your expression tinged with darkness, uncertainty for what's ahead. |
by NobodyKnowsItButMe
I like these line the most: |
by Aubrey
Very nice:) |
by BlueJay
I have a lot to say about this piece, (don't freak out like 90% of it is good) First though, let me say that the title is amazing. It is what caught my eye to even read this piece. |