Comments : The Fern (String Senryu)

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Syrup....your twisted......and i luv ya for it!!!!!

    Awesome write......deliciously dark as always!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    MT you are the princess of the dark!!!!!!
    I'm speechless!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Wild flower

    O.O What is this?!?!
    This is perfect, and I just love it:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    Wow... Amazing... Excellent piece:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    WHOA......

    I hear your dark creepy voice when I read this..that scared me more than the poem LMAO

    This is epic, seriously the way you word your poetry, especially your dark poetry, creates a quick horror movie scene and I love it. Im always intrigued and you know Ive always hated dark poetry but because of your awesomeness I love most of it now ..brilliannt...

    last line...omg...awesome!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Andrea, why do you do this to me? I am seriously freaked out, there has been some awful creepy stuff happening and then I read this!!

    Evil lurks in cracks,
    floorboards harbor entities
    the Fern guards secrets.

    ^^^Especially this part, that was just so ughh for me, the cold chill I got reading it.

    But you my dear, are just a dab hand at every genre, you always capture my attention and make me feel something, whether it is deep, heartbreaking emotion, a warmth and calmness or totally spooked out!

    Just amazing :)
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