Unchained Emotions (String Haynaku)

by PinkyPrincess   Nov 25, 2012


Anger
brewing inside
like hot coffee.

Words
said aloud
bruise my heart.

Pain
is painted
across our lives.

Haynaku:

The Haynaku Verse Form, was invented in the 21st Century by Eileen Tabios, and consists of a tercet of six words, with the first line containing one word, the second line has two words and the final line has three words. Rhyme, meter and syllable count are all in the discretion of the author. The haynaku verses can be stringed together as a single poem.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    This piece bears a great and strong message that one should have calmness when getting angry just by changing his/her place or situation. The large pain that anger leaves can be psychologically dangerous, especially on repetition causing precipitation to the other person.
    I loved your thought provoking poem.
    Thank you for sharing.
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by ArtistrySoul

    There's a some what cold atmosphere 'brewing' when reading this poem lol . . . . a simple and plain piece but gives a punchy outburst of imagery.

    I found this was an argument, you compelled it well with your choice of words :P

    Nice short written poem 5/5

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