Hi, I hope everyone likes this. It was my first attempt at a real poem. Please criticize I like knowing that my work isn't perfect so I can try harder to please people. I kinda made this up on the spot and just went along adding rhymes that I made up so sorry if it's really ameture and a waste of time. Hope you like:) please comment I love talking to people :)

Hi, I hope everyone likes this. It was my first attempt at a real poem. Please criticize I like knowing that my work isn't perfect so I can try harder to please people. I kinda made this up on the spot and just went along adding rhymes that I made up so sorry if it's really ameture and a waste of time. Hope you like:) please comment I love talking to people :)

Also! This is the person saying this poem to themself. Just clarrifying that with you guys:)

P.S: sorry about the double comment. Accidently pressed the comment button twice. I do that alot don't I? Lol.