Comments : Before Dawn

  • 11 years ago

    by Wild flower

    First off I LOVE HOW IT LOOKS
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    And wow, your poetry keeps wowing me lol;P

    Just perfect!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Andrea, I love this, the essence of a relationship, a firm and strong one is evident but there is a sadness and I have thought that maybe this is talking about Alzhemers and how the couple are coping with it, but I also am leaning towards the passing of one
    but then on reading it again, I am wondering whether these people have ever met...

    I am a little unsure, maybe it's me, I'll ponder on it and may come back
    :)

    Mwah
    xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Welllll, that last stanza completely won me over <3 best detailes everrrrr...sigh* this is one of those poems I'd like to go on and on and on about, but Im too hung up on that last stanza..just brilliant.

  • 11 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Brrrilllliianttt!!! This piece made me read it again and again and I felt still want to read once more. The last line ended with some dots which means this piece wishes to be not ending, haha.
    Lovely write
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Meme

    *Sigh* ...

    That was kinda hard for me to read, loving someone who never realise you ever existed! Your words were perfectly chosen to give the reader that intense deeling of how the story goes.

    Loved it, more than you can ever imagine.
    Nominated and to my favs..

  • 11 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very Nicely Done Maple!!!