The Donut (A love story)

by Blood of a Lion   Nov 28, 2012


Oh divine donut!
Melt in my mouth you moist succulent treat!
A bag for two dollars? MISTER!
Let me buy your donuts oh please,
And none of those day old ones 'kay?
Oh the taste!
No glaze, no haze!
Oh babe!
The taste!
Nibble...
Oh child, do you not have but a treat?
A bag for a day a week for just a treat.
I guess I can part with one such lovely dough flavored treat.
Let your mind wander as you bite, dip and lick.
Oh donut, you're mine so neat...
Oh...
Another child, do you not have a donut as well?
I suppose oh dear one I can part with another,
All is well still!
I still have four of the divine moist treats!
Oh lovely donut...
You are mine.
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  • 10 years ago

    by BlueJay

    My brother and i read this together, we also laughed so much we cried. then he begged my mother to buy doughnuts for dinner. she read the poem said thats awesome and agreed. So as you can see, your poem really leaves an impression. Even though I think some of the lines were a bit closer to being weak than i would have liked this is still a wonderful piece. lol nicely penned.

    • 10 years ago

      by Blood of a Lion

      I have the same opinion about the piece honestly if I remember correctly I did this for a club challenge in a couple of minutes. So I'm thinking about rewriting the whole thing, thank you kindly

  • 12 years ago

    by Let It Be

    Omg i laughed so hard i cried i love it

  • 12 years ago

    by Ashdown

    This made me gol, doughnuts are amazing!
    I bought a dozen from Krispy Kreme today and they are hiding in my car from my roommates. I, unlike you, do not share my doughnuts :)

    • 12 years ago

      by Blood of a Lion

      Thanks for the comment :3 yes donuts are magical

  • 12 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Cheers to the donut.....lmao: ).....great piece: )

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    The donut!

    Thank you for writing this poem, lol
    I enjoyed it.

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