Comments : The Donut (A love story)

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    The donut!

    Thank you for writing this poem, lol
    I enjoyed it.

  • 11 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Cheers to the donut.....lmao: ).....great piece: )

  • 11 years ago

    by Ashdown

    This made me gol, doughnuts are amazing!
    I bought a dozen from Krispy Kreme today and they are hiding in my car from my roommates. I, unlike you, do not share my doughnuts :)

    • 11 years ago

      by Blood of a Lion

      Thanks for the comment :3 yes donuts are magical

  • 11 years ago

    by Let It Be

    Omg i laughed so hard i cried i love it

  • 10 years ago

    by BlueJay

    My brother and i read this together, we also laughed so much we cried. then he begged my mother to buy doughnuts for dinner. she read the poem said thats awesome and agreed. So as you can see, your poem really leaves an impression. Even though I think some of the lines were a bit closer to being weak than i would have liked this is still a wonderful piece. lol nicely penned.

    • 10 years ago

      by Blood of a Lion

      I have the same opinion about the piece honestly if I remember correctly I did this for a club challenge in a couple of minutes. So I'm thinking about rewriting the whole thing, thank you kindly