by L
The donut! |
by Aubrey
Cheers to the donut.....lmao: ).....great piece: ) |
by Ashdown
This made me gol, doughnuts are amazing! |
Thanks for the comment :3 yes donuts are magical |
by Let It Be
Omg i laughed so hard i cried i love it |
Haha aww thanks :) Glad you liked it! |
by BlueJay
My brother and i read this together, we also laughed so much we cried. then he begged my mother to buy doughnuts for dinner. she read the poem said thats awesome and agreed. So as you can see, your poem really leaves an impression. Even though I think some of the lines were a bit closer to being weak than i would have liked this is still a wonderful piece. lol nicely penned. |
I have the same opinion about the piece honestly if I remember correctly I did this for a club challenge in a couple of minutes. So I'm thinking about rewriting the whole thing, thank you kindly |