by Maple Tree
Amreen.... what a heartfelt write this is.... truly a heart gripping piece!!! |
The variation of feelings here really resembles the seasons, changing one after the other. Strong love must be durable, un-affected by whatsoever reasons. This is somehow difficult but do exists. Your writing is really heart taking. I loved it. |
by Lostlove1
You have done well incorperating the seasons into your love poem Amreen. I love your poem it is very beautiful. |
by Chelsey
I wrote a similar piece just like this called seasons, and I know EXACTLY how it feels to have someone be there for a season, a season that you love.. but sadly thats a part of life...people pass by for seasons and if its meant to be it will be, if not we must be thankful for the memories and lessons learned. |
I loved how you tie together love with the seasons. I makes it all that much more beautiful. Amazing work hun! Loved it! =) |
by Meena Krish
Oh yes, love at times changes like the season and leaves us with mixed emotions. I like how |
by NobodyKnowsItButMe
"Love is flower-like" |
by Mohan
Nice amreen, |
This is such a beautifully written love poem. I really enjoyed reading this from the beginning till the end. It was captivating with elegance and an exquisite serenity. |
Yes its true, |
Wonderful Job Amreen. Congradulations!!! |
by Liz
This makes me sad. I don't know if you wrote this out of personal experience, but it's exactly what I'm feeling right now. This is definitely epic :p |
This is beautifully written with outstanding flow and the wonderful imagery of the four seasons as compared to a lover . I really injoyed reding each and every stanza |
I adore the metaphor of the changing seasons of love. It's simply beautiful. The ending is perfect!!! |
by ornella
This is a beautiful poem I enjoyed it very much |
by Adelle
A very beautiful poem that tells a sad but lovely story. I enjoyed this very much. |
by Rusheena
This is amazing! Your metaphors flow together so beautifully and helps make a sad but common tale of broken love original. It's refreshing and familiar, all the same time. Fantastic job! |
Awh this poem flows sooo beautifuly! heck i couldn't ever write a poem sooo beautiful even if you paid me a thousand bucks in cash in 5 secs! lol i LOVE the second to the last stanza since i love winter but i also get that part since i've had my heart broken but i sincerly think this poem is just beautiful! 5/5 |
I could really connect with this piece. You captured the essence of love that comes strong and quickly and flees just as suddenly. Absolutely beautiful |
Your poem is beautiful, and all of your writings that I have read so far inspire me :) |