Comments : A Wife's Plea

  • 11 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    Wow....that is all i can say :) I love it

  • 11 years ago

    by Wild flower

    I hate your sad pieces:(
    They are just so sad, there is something in this piece, I dont know how to say it.
    Are you ok?<3

    But this is so powerful, and you're a really strong woman. This is perfect:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    What a sorrowful piece and feelings! I can guess there's something abnormal hidden on a personal basis. I'm getting surprised, not expecting you feel like that.
    Hope you're OK honey!

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Heartbreaking!! Im going to touch on the positive side of this so I dont cry thinking about the sad lol

    The best thing about you two is you have one another...There are so many people going through what your husband is going through, but they have no one. Lost hope in themselves and no one to fight for so they give up....If anything you guys get out of all this, out of the worst circumstance you can imagine, is that you are a poet and know that you share your story with so many others that when we read stuff like this, yes it may be sad, but its totally inspiring because the love you have for him while hes going through this, while his body is changing, is just beautiful. And the gratefulness he has for you is just as beautiful...

    Lovely write to him Andrea. I love you!

  • 11 years ago

    by Angie

    Wow this is heartwrenching, but I agree with Chelsey... I know at times he just wants to give up and I'm sure you do too, but when all the good things you have out weighs the bad, you just keep on fighting all the more to live on... the love the two of you share is so precious and so many would give all they have to experience that. This is also a very powerful inspiring piece written from the heart...

    always here for you both... hugs you and love you

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I feel really unable to comment on the poem itself because it is deep and personal to you...and honestly I love the piece but the sadness in here breaks my heart and I feel really upset for you, the emotion was so evident, it brought tears to my eyes.

    love ya
    xxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Decayed

    I bow to you... with all my hats, my flowers, my praise and love.

    THIS is what poetry is all about.

  • 11 years ago

    by Xanthe

    Beautiful, Andrea. Truly is raw, and one of the most heartfelt writes I've read.

  • 11 years ago

    by myonlymoon

    This seriously brought tears to my eyes maple!!!
    I absolutely love that you kept it raw and you did it flawlessly. I think people forget althougheter that poem is about expression and freedom!

    I hope all is well with you, you are in my thoughts!!