Comments : Tongue Tied

  • 11 years ago

    by Meme

    If thats what a tongue-tied Chels would write, then what would she do if she wasn't? WOOOOOOWW girl, just wow!!

    Those emotions were so overwhelming, I felt so tangled up in your words.

    Love it!

  • 11 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Awww. I love this poem! It was so beautifully written. I reallly love how you started this poem... about how you're apologizing for writing many poems for other people who don't deserve it.. and how you wish to write for this person, but because you're happy you are unable to express yourself.

    I loved this part: "relying
    on my pen to take off like the hands of a pianist composing a love song, but it doesn't"
    ^^ I love the comparison to a pianist composing a love song.

    I could relate to this poem in so many ways. I definitely get the idea of writing poems for people who don't deserve it, and also wanting to write a nice poem for someone but just feeling 'tongue-tied' as you've explained here. For me, personally, I feel like it's easier to write sad poems, but it's so difficult for me to write a 'happy' or 'romantic' poem nowadays. I want to express those positive feelings sometimes, but I can't come up with a good poem. I think you get what I mean lol.

    Anyway, I still think it's awesome that you've managed to write a lovely poem for this person, despite of being tongue-tied!

    Loved it! Great job :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Chelsey, what is this? This is awesome :)
    You write so beautifully...so easily, its awesome!
    x